Writing Help/Critque Thread

[neo_ozon]

I know that we have a lot of writers on here and this thread is meant to help them become the very best they can be and give helpful criticism. Now this does not revolve entirely revolve around fictional/non-fictional prose, it can also be in regards reviews, essays, essentially anything that involves you typing or writing words on a screen.

Currently working on quite a number of stories, most of them inspired by Japanese super hero shows, but a lot of them are purely original. I've had this one in particular on my mind for quite some time. It's about a Samurai who gets ostracized from his village after the lord he serves denounces him. He later travels Westward and by pure accident gets appointed as one of King Arthur's knights.